Animation and storytelling is good. The only thing is you didn't follow a simple rule, you shoud've made the dialog stay on screen longer. The rule is you should keep it on screen long enough for you to read it twice, insuring anyone can read it without having to rewind.
what the fuck
Hilarious! Loved all the jokes. 'the dwarf is on cocaine' had me dying!
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